Pro-Wrestler turned Used Car Salesman... turned Hollywood Pitch Man? Of course!
By Scott Manville
Founder, TVWritersVault.com | Contributing Writer, National Association Television Program Executives (NATPE)
If there’s one thing that can make or break a TV or movie pitch, it’s the Logline. Producers know it all comes down to marketing the core premise and plot of the script or idea. The two or three sentences written as a Logline distilled from the full screenplay or TV format needs to deliver the core idea and provoke intrigue. A captivating logline can trigger the reader to see the potential for entertainment value and want to see that TV series or movie made. They’ll want that script or treatment to work. It gets them emotionally “invested”. And that’s always a great way for any producer to dive into a script or treatment pitched.
Another value of a great logline is how well it “travels” when a writer pitches a producer. That producer pitches an executive, and that executive pitches their boss. That one or two sentence idea becomes the catalyst for every step in the process of development, pitching, producing, and ultimately marketing to the viewers and audiences. Those few sentences are a point of departure for the full story, but they remain the touchstone for everything to serve that core idea.
Here’s some professional advice on writing and pitching loglines that sell:
Movies can be marketed to the public with taglines that sound compelling, but they don’t give the details required when pitching to sell a project.
“In a world where justice has failed, one woman fights to expose the truth!” is an example of the type of “poster tagline” we might see, but it gives us more of the theme of the film, rather than the actual story.
When writing and pitching a logline for a new screenplay, the one-liner can still have clever wording, but needs to be much more explicit. Here’s what a logline might be for the same movie-
“When a miscarriage of justice sets free a corrupt politician, Rebecca Manning goes deep inside the underbelly of K-Street and the world of Lobbyists to expose the truth”.
That example tells us the specific premise, the world the story explores, and the specific plight of our main character…in one sentence. It’s enough information for a reader to know if they like the subject and story, and if so, their mind will be open to reading more. Also, in reading more they’ll have a sense for where the story goes and will be better equipped to know if the right choices were made for how the story unfolds.
2. Know Your Story:
Loglines are also a great litmus test. Writing one will test how well you know your story or concept, and if that story actually has a clear and original core. Knowing the heart of your story and main character helps you develop the best logline for your pitch. In screenwriting & film, the logline almost always focuses on the plight of the main character. In scripted television, a logline may do the same, but can often cover an overall agenda involving the main characters and the world or setting in which it takes place. A logline for scripted TV should be selling the potential for longevity of story development, rather than one singular story. If the pitch is for a Reality TV series or any unscripted series, then it may be as simple as describing the subject and how it plays out so we can see a formula that would create entertaining content. the story unfolds.
3. The Imaginary What-If!:
If the first step in selling a pitch for TV of film is having a cleverly crafted logline, then the first step in creating a great story premise is to use the power of your imagination, and one fun way is using “The Imaginary What-If”…. Blending ironic circumstances and characters sets off chemistry, comedy, and conflict. It’s a great exercise, and often a gateway to brilliant concepts for story. “What if a young boy befriended a lost alien and brought him home?“, “What if dinosaurs were cloned?“, “What if a disgruntled high school chemistry teacher began producing meth?“, “What if a person awoke form a coma, only to find the world had been taken over by a zombie apocalypse?“… These are the seeds that trigger the imagination of others reading a pitch, and fuel story. Have fun, and get clever with your what ifs!
The goal in creating a great logline for TV or film, is to tell what we’re actually watching, and not fall into the trap of telling just the theme. It’s a balance of both, with more focus on story than theme. When better choices are made, a great logline opens our mind and we can see the potential for story. Lets try a few on for size and see which ones feel the best.
We think Logline numbers 1 & 4 were better than numbers 2 and 3. They’re specific enough to show us what the story is actually about. The others serve better as taglines or teasers, but tell nothing of the actual story. Here’s a few more examples of TV and Movie pitch loglines to get a feel for how they read…
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